Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
In my opinion, I prefer to spend my time alone. People are always easily influence each other, it may change your original plan since you get alone with friends and try to cooperate with them. Moreover, spend the time alone is a good chance to train you getting independent. The most important point is that you could do whatever you want while you are alone, it’s a challenge to test the ability of self-control.
First, I think when the time while people gather together and discuss what next going to do, it could spend a lot of time than you decide by yourself. Let me put it in this way, I’ve ever joined many discussion groups for assignment at college, it always cost long time to check everyone’s available time when all of members going to schedule a meeting. If I just do it by myself, I could save so much time from discuss the detail which doesn’t matter about the assignment and then do the research by my own. It’s more clearly to aim a goal than many people getting together.
On the other hand, I always feel the character of independence is very important for a person. The person who could stand by his own and seldom rely on other people, that’s the mature person used to be. For example, in college’s assignment, find information for the essay without the help from your friends, it might be a rough way to get through it, but you will learn more than many people do it together.
You got independence while you spend the time alone, not to mention the ability of self-control. People are used to be lazy when nobody binds you. For instance, mother always being the role to ask her son goes to do homework on time, once the mother outing, children always forgot what they should do, that’s the lazy habit of human. Spending time alone is not a worst thing but you couldn’t control yourself, so how to do exactly self-control is just the most important lesson learn from being alone.
In conclusion, I prefer to spend my time alone. I could plan my time very free and don’t even to mind others people opinions. Plus, I can learn self-control by the time while I being alone. I think it’s not difficult to learn how to getting alone with friends, but it’s really hard to learn how to spend the time by yourself perfectly.
1 comment:
Nancy, it's good for you to give a lot of examples from both sides to support your response. It really makes sense and helps others to understand your standpoint.
However, I think you kind of misuse some words. For example, at the third line in the first para, you use the word "cooperate" which means you help each other to do something, but I think here you want to express that if you get along with friends, you may disturb each other. So if you want to focus on the bad side of getting along with friends, maybe you can write this part as "When people get together, it's easy for them to disturb each other and make changes in their original plan, therefore, ......."
And about the word "self-control", I think it's not a good idea to say that, because when you alone, you don't have to control yourself. Therefore, I think the last sentence can be redundant. And due to the same reason, the fourth para should be modified or deleted. But whatever, it's just my own opinion.
Furthermore, in the second para, you can't use the phrase "when the time" and "while" at the same time, because they are the same.
Good job! Make an extra effort and do your best forever!
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