Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer. (Please write in 300-350 words within 30 mins)
I love sharing, especially when hanging out with friends. Therefore, I prefer to spend my time with friends rather than alone.
To me, friends are so important that they are just like part of my life. I love to spend my time sharing every tiny thing with them, and I also enjoy the atmosphere when we encourage each other. It’s hard to imagine without friends.
On the weekend, I usually would go out with my best friend who is my roommate in the college. It may surprise others that the favorite place we love to go is not the department stores, shopping malls or movie theaters, but the teahouse where people often have tea with snack only. Why we choose such a place? The reason is quite clear, “we just want to sit down and talk.” To talk about the life, the work and the people; we don’t want to waste any time shopping or watching movie but sharing. I really believe we both have refreshed and relaxed ourselves by sharing.
Not only sharing, but also encouraging, another place we love to go is the library. I still remember when we were in the college; we stay in the library until 10 p.m. together for preparing the midterm and the final. We taught and learned from each other, more over, we encouraged with each other, and I got a lot of brave from her. Until now, we still spend our time discussing about learning and give each other the encouragement with blessing. I believe we can pass the difficulties by the other’s company.
On the contrary, I can never imagine that if I don’t have friends hanging out with me. I might not bear the lonely feeling when I am depressed. When I am cheerful, the only thing I can do is to put it in mind. It’s nearly impossible that I can only spend most of the time alone because it’s hurtful for me to stand all kinds for feeling but not to share. Therefore, it’s definitely I prefer to spend time with friends.
1 comment:
1. Every main idea of the passage is very clear, and you took nice example to support your opinion. I got three points in your article, a) relax by sharing b) encouraging c) afraid of lonely feeling.
2. Using many difficult sentences and structure. I like this sentence “I can never imagine that if I don’t have friends hanging out with me. I might not bear the lonely feeling when I am depressed.” This sentence also could be the answer in speaking part, very useful.
3. I think the second passage could move to the end, and then you'll get a conclusion. It seems like you combined the third point with ending, so I think if you add one more passage to reconstruct your opinions, it might helpful to get a higher score. :)
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