Do you agree or disagree with following statement?Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
The mass media is truly essential to our daily life. We use it to broad our views and get the first-hand information to know what had happened in the world. It, however, also has some negative impacts on our thinking. For the sake of abound personal and private life of the public figures and celebrities. We doom to be more sensitive and critic.
Often we can hear the exclusive news of some people broadcast by the televisions or newspapers. At first we seem all curious about it and want to know more. Nevertheless, the media just want to catch attention from audience. In this way, they are forced to reveal someone own private life or gossip. In raises the issue that privacy seems no more respected by anyone. In influences the most people tend to probe into someones life and thus, the trend will go on and has the reverse demonstration on the watchers themselves.
Furthermore, once the media pays too much attention to the figures or celebrities, it loses the focus. Usually we public want to get the meaningful insights from these people. On the contrary, we lose the worthy inspiration from the events. For example, if one political figure is widely recognized by his background or past performance, and be the spotlight for his sharp tone. However, we seldom heard some contributions he has made for the current issues, what do you think of this? The focus should be the values and the views he made, instead, not the figure itself.
Of course the media should pay attention to the figures and celebrities for their achievements to be admired by the public. This is not to mean, these people can replace our natural respect to the people around us. And knowing too much unnecessary information together with keeping the pace too close behind someone, these two really should not be always the interests people worth causing.
2 comments:
It's good for you to indicate that media play an important role in our daily life at the very beginning. And then following passages provides more pros and cons of media.
Also, I really appreciate the conjunctions you use because they make your article more smoothly and well organized.
However, in the third paragraph, the sentence which you use it to present the example is an ungrammatical sentence because "if" should be used to connect two sentences, such as "If you come to see me, I'll give you a surprise."
Another suggestion for is that I think you can give the readers a direct answer in the first paragraph, but still you can preserve what you write originally.
1 .You used many difficult vocabulary and they’re all fit your contents, I think it’s really worth to higher your grade.
2. You shorten the structure this time. It’s great that point out the main idea directly and it wouldn’t let audience misunderstand the meaning of article.
[note]
* For the sake of abound personal and private life of the public figures and celebrities. We doom to be more sensitive and critic.
* exclusive news
* probe into someones life
* The focus should be the values and the views he made, instead, not the figure itself.
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