Nancy's Writing Practice 06

Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

The part of human nature gained fulfillment through getting with people who are similar with them and doing things together. Since ancient time people always getting together and setting many groups which have resemblance to their work or hobby, such as hunting and religion. By this way they could feel more alive because there are so many people stand at the same line. Further, once a group extending to an organization, the power would bring more force as far as we can see.

First, we can see school clubs are always playing a vital role in students’ life. Although parents will upset while their children paying too much attention on it. However, Look at the bright side, school club is the only place which they could having fun and learning things at the same time. By doing this students could compare with peers and found their own potential, and the fulfillments achieved by sharing pleasure with members who have same hobby with you. In this example we could how much merits of joining in a group, it’s no doubt that groups mean a lot to people, or we can say it just like the soul provision which people couldn’t live without it.

Furthermore, organizations consist of more professional people than groups and they could use a lot of fund or resources to run this whole team. For instance, there are a religion organization is very famous in Taiwan, which rising fund for the family lived in poverty and helping other country. The members they own their uniform and they are pride of it because it’s a sign of charity. What a beautiful thing that people gather together for helping others who needs help, and these kind people they don’t want any feedback because they already please themselves by practicing charity. What’s more, an organization certainly has more professional channels to achieved goals more quickly, such as social service organization. These kinds of organizations are really important for some people because they need help but nobody noticed it except these professional organizations.

In conclusion, group is necessary for people, whether they like joining or for those people who need them. Having fun in the group could release pressure and people wouldn’t feel lonely anymore. Moreover, an organization could more than that, not just please their own but also help other people.

2 comments:

Wendy said...

1.Good beginning and conclusion. You give your opinions very clearly.
2.Good examples in paragraph two and three, very specific and persuasive.

Joseph said...

feedbacks from Joseph:

1.nancy you induce the historical background as the opening tnen turn into the modern time reveals that the essence of group or organization will not change its function

2. also nancy you take so many examples to illustrate makes the readers so fascinated with your expalnation

3. i wonder that the difference between group and organization you make in the second paragraph truly impress the readers,but in the question i think the meaning of group and organization are the same(as my opinion), so it takes some time to exam the view