Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your point.
To earn money indeed is necessary and important for our daily life. Still some people are making lots of money but others may just meet their needs barely. Here is the question: who leads a better and happy life? Thus, different people have different views.
On the one hand, people who think that making a lot of money is important have some reasons. Maybe for these people, money is so essential for them and, a symbol of guarantee of their status. For fear of being looked down by the public and in a situation of worry and anxiety. Furthermore, if they have earned a lot of money, they can use it for many purposes and will not confined for the reason of money. Its true that money really make things more easily. Also, there is a sense of fulfillment and satisfaction in their mind. Not the money itself attracts the desire for success, instead, the invisible values are the goals for them.
On the other hand, some people may think that they are satisfied with their life even without amounts of money. For them, a comfortable living is the most important thing in their life. For some reasons they believe that even without lot of money, they can still lead a stable and comfortable life. They think that the life standard is not assessed in terms of wealth. On the contrary, they can create their own life without amounts of money and even with a little money. Furthermore, earning a lot of money for them may cause some problems to handle with. For example, they may worry being robbed by bad guys. Even, the desire for earning more money may result in many consequent problems. And in this way, they may lose their pursuit of the true meaning of life, and just focus on making more money by sacrificing their life standard.
I favor that to be satisfied with a comfortable living will be better. Because we cannot earn lots of money all the time. There must be something worth chasing and more precious for us. And, it is really hard to define how much money is enough. However, we can use our money we have to create our valuable wealth that is more important.
2 comments:
I think your article is really well-organized and logical, and you provide several reasonable ideas for each viewpoint. But still I think you can take your stand earlier then you can give more specific reasons for your point (just like the topic mentioned).
Moreover, there is a grammatical problems in paragraph 4, in which "because" should connect two sentences together but not forms a sentence by itself.
yeah! I agree with Wendy, I think you could choose a side in the first paragraph.
But you still gave many examples adequately, and both stands' viewpoints are very clear. good job!
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